The Shortest story ever

Today in Moana learning hub we did some six sentence stories.We got to choose what the topic was we could either use Character chooser or just make one up our selfs.Here is my six sentence story.This is the video that gave us some inspiration.This picture is of the requirements we needed to have in our six sentence story.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_continue=2&v=MvYCseEDVhg

Once upon a time, there was a young talented horse.

In the paddock on the hills full of grass is where he lived.

This talented horse could jump over anything,high or low,he could jump higher than any horse in the land.

One day the horse's owner was organising him to go to the meat works,because he was no longer wanted.

The talented horse was very sad and confused on what was happening to him.

Then a loving person bought him off the work meat truck for eighty cents,they discovered that he loved jumping so they bet the world record for show jumping.

Duathlon!

LI: I am sharing some of my ideas, feelings and thoughts on my blog about the

     Duathlon  today!

Success Criteria: It makes sense when I read it I have used capital letters and full stops correctly I have had my blogging buddy check my blog before I publish it            My feelings about the duathlon  All of the year 5 girls are lined up at the starting line.Oh my gosh I am feeling so nervous.BANG!!!Everybody starts running around field.2 minutes later... I am already puffing and huffing.Second lap here I come,my legs are so sore.As I start heading towards the hill my legs slow down my mouth is so dry.In my head I was going keep moving ,run harder.I quickly put on my helmet click its on.I use my muscles to pull my bike up.I slowly jog down the path.Bump I'm on the grass.I swing my leg over my bike.Pedaling has fast as I go.As I take over people I sweat like it's raining.After 2 laps of biking I finally get of .I can  my grandma cheering me on.I jump back on,Biking back to the path.I carefully lay my bike down on the grass.Then I pull my helmet off.Run run here I come.Down the hill I go ,I start slowing down into a jog .Finally I complete the first lap but there's one more lap to go.I am so tired I really want to walk but I can't because I just have to keep on running.I am looking straight at yellow sticks.Finally I finished.I am dying of thirst right now.I feel exhausted. 5 words I was feeling like after our duathlon .Sweaty .thirsty .Exhausted .puffed .boiling