Today we have been doing a slow write based on our holidays. These are the instructions that we used to create our slow write.My slow write is about horse riding in the holidays.
Se1: Start with the word “woohoo!”
S 2 2: This sentence must use emotive words.
Se 3: This sentence must focus on the sense of smell/taste/touch or hearing
Se 4: Must be a 5 words long.
Se 5: Must start with an adverb.
Se 6: This sentence must contain a question mark
Se 7: start with the word “Although”
S8: 8:This sentence must have 3 adjectives in a list
Se 9: This sentence must start with a “Why is it…” phrase
Se 10 : This sentence must end with a sound word (onomatopoeia) and an
exclamation mark.
"Woohoo!," it's finally the holidays.I am very excited to have two whole weeks of no school.Ahh the fresh smell of a farm,the sound of a rooster crowing,the feel of the horse's winter coat,yum the taste of a mince and cheese pie.Patiently,I watch Teifi and Jordyn leap over the jumps.When is it going to be my turn?
Although,I had to wait a long time,it was finally my turn to jump.
Oden is the most majestical,amazing,kind,beautiful pony you could ever have.
Why is it that the holidays go so,so fast?
The holiday are over -DAM it!
